Lizzie

[elizabeth]

Lizzie, the lab/wild rat.

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Basics

|Name| Lizzie
|Aliases| Liz
|Age| 3 years
|Gender| Female
|Affiliation| Rat Rebellion

Physical

|Coloration| Simple Brown
|Oddities| Long fur around head due to hair growing experiment.
|Extras| Small gold colored ear ring in right ear.
|General Appearance|

Once a simple brown rat, now a human haired rat. But she has chose to embrace her extra hair, seen as a fashionable addtion to herself. Lizzie's fur around her body up to her forhead is as normal as any other Rat's, but her head and back neck have shaggy brown fur appearing as "human hair." A small gold colored ear ring hangs on her right ear, although she wants to appear fashionable she isn't quite "pretty" on the inside. Lizzie is also very slim, since she lost her normal rat life she is driven to be hard core and be extreamly active. Shes pretty hard to get along with, shes almost never in a good mood.

Lizzie wants to look serious, so she disided to give herself her own "piercing." Since rats have large ears, what a better way to show off her dislike of nonsence then to give herself an ear ring and fix her extra hair to look trampy. Lizzies not proud of her extra fur, but whats she suppose to do about it? Standing on twos, shes about half a foot tall. Around the avrage size of a rat, Lizzie has no other defects other then extra fur. Lizzie's entire body is slim because of lack of food and frequent activety, also inproveing her serious look. All in all, Lizzie wants to look serious and she does.

Mental

|Likes|
-Getting What She Wants. Lizzie loves getting what she wants, when she wants.
-Being Boss. Lizzie can't stand being in a lower position.
-Fighting. If you wont listen to her, shes got one sure fire way to make sure you get the message.

|Dislikes|
-Being Told Off. Nothing gets her angry like being told shes not so tough.
-Kiss Ups. Lizzie can't stand people who tell her lies just to get on her good side.
-Not Being Able To Socailize. Lizzie believes being away from other rats just wastes time of not being able to dominate others.

|Strengths|
-Intelligance
-Dominating
-Strong-Willed
-Physicly Strong

|Weaknesses|
-Inablity to listen to others
-Laid back alittle to much
-Under estimates others
-Gets in too much trouble

|Complete Personality|
Lizzie loves to be the boss, she loves to tell people off and say "You're weak both mentally and physicly." She doesn't take any nonsence or lies, she might spare you if you gravel at her feet. Lizzies like a teenage diva and an adult female gangster mix, but shes got a soft spot for people who can dominate her and beat her in a fight. After being taken down, she'll admire whom ever beat her. She wants to know their ways of fighting, what makes them so un-stable. Will she ever find that "specail someone?" Maybe, maybe not. But if there is any guy out there willing to deal with the pain in the pants, then wont that be a miracle!

Lizzie is also a cusser, shes not a dirty mouth but if you tick her off enough she'll get mean! Was it the experiment that made her this way or was it just the way she was born? Well, no one was there to prove it so everyone assumes she was born this way. Thats just the way she is, what a pain she is.

History

|Parents| Shirly and Andre.
|Siblings| Andrea, Seze, Sasha, and James.
|Complete History|

To be short, Lizzie had grown with her family until being stollen by humans. Lizzie was always the butt-head in her family, she pranked her siblings, was rude to her parents. But acasinally she would tell her family she loved them, they knew she was only jokeing with the pranks. Lizzie never really meant to hurt anyone in anyway, shape or form.

Lizzie was farlly happy with her family, until being stolen away by humans. They were trying to find a cure to bolding humans, one shot and your hair will grow twice the size it orginally was. They gave her this shot and now she lives her life with fur to her head to her forhead like a human's. Until ecsapeing the labs, she tried to learn to embrace her extra fur.

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Elizabeth

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|On Meerkat Manor|
|Sample Post|

This is an example off of a dragon fourm I joined

She walks across the land, she stares at her paws as she walks. Had she not noticed where she was? Was she totally ablivious? A stranger dragon sits 10 feet infront of her, she stares at the dragon. The female sees fear in the stranger's eyes, the mid-night moon shines on her deap blue scales. The dragoness could see right past any dragon's emocain.

(if the other dragon asks for her name)

The female is varlly able to even utter her name, shes not even able to apply her name. Her name reminds her of her birth, a dark day. A day that shoudn't have happend, but it did anyway. She whispers her name, but just loud enough to for the other dragon to here. Ever so quitetly, "Eclipse..."[/ul]

[Makarov]

Hey Elizabeth, this is a fantastic biography and a fantastic character, but I'm just gonna mention a couple things as I accept it.

First of all, I've noticed you've placed your Roleplaying level as Semi-Advanced - and I don't mean to be the judge on this, but based on the length and number of mistakes in wording in some of the sections - particularly the Roleplaying sample, that you are rather on an Intermediate level (which by all means isn't low, but if you took a peek at some of our bonafide semi advanced to advanced roleplaying posts they're a tad fatter and juicier).

This is not to bring you down, Rattus is open to to roleplayers of all abilities and makes and levels, and we want to help those on a slightly lower plain to build up to greater heights in roleplaying. Now I'm sure you're sick of me being an absolute NAG by now so all I ask is that you just remember, and I'll leave this bio with an:

ACCEPTED